Fantasy is important in story telling, don't you think?
"Slouch in the Couch" has something special.
"Slouch in the Couch" has something special.
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47 comments:
What a weird story.Everything rhymes but it was very cool I wonder if a slouch form a couch would appear in my couch that would be fun rather than lying in the sun I'm thinking what if Grock one ate a really big bun haha that would be really funny!Ohhh yeah and the author is trying to teach us to do your homework quickly before it is time for fun and lying out in the sun what a great time while eating a lime! Reply me Mr.Phil or you must pay the bill!
Joji 3D
NIce rhymes Joji..
Sorry, i forgot to put my name.. My comment is above..hehe.. sorry
Judith 3D
This is the most weird story I ever read. It"s weird , when a Slouch can go out from a Couch, and a big Grock came out from a small bag coloured pink, and writtened Rare............
Claudia 3D
Yeah Joji, I think you're right - the author is trying to tell us not to put off doing your HW, just because you want to fool around.
Chong ming Joji,
Phil
Judith, Are you well? I don't see any comments from you here. Perhaps you were dreaming.
Phil
Claudia, Sure the story is rare as you say, but what is the point?
Phil
JOJI< JOJI<,
Hey you never checked my comment from last week's homework.
Phil
Wow! This story is really cool and it has a lot or rhymes in it.. I LOVE Rhymes! They and interesting... But, I'm not really good with rhymes.. I can't make any rhymes.. Other than that... The story is Interesting and NICE!!! LOVE IT! i ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!
Judith 3D
There are many rhymes in this story.I kind of like it because of the rymes.
Mr.Phil on Thursday,Friday,saturday and sunday i can not open the blog.
Marcel 3a
The story was cool.If there is a Slouch I will kick him till he/she is in antartica. If I can. I think we should all do homework so there will be no slouches.
Priska
3D
The story was cool.If there is a Slouch I will kick him till he/she is in antartica. If I can. I think we should all do homework so there will be no slouches.
Priska
3D
The story was cool.If there is a Slouch I will kick him till he/she is in antartica. If I can. I think we should all do homework so there will be no slouches.
Priska
3D
Wow.....I like the story but it's the weird story why there is a sloch in the pink bag.
William 3D
The story is very nice but,it's a little bit weird when a slouch came out from the couch and took the boy's books.Then the boy starting chasing the slouch then a Grock came out of a pink bag with a writting "RARE".But still it was a nice story.I think the story have a moral.The moral is don't be to lazy to do your homework.
Madeline 3A
Judith, Is there a message in this story?
Phil
Marcel, don't worry about not being able to open the blog. You can do that on Monday.
Do you think this story tells us something?
Phil
Priska, I think you understand the story really well.
Tai bang le!
Phil
William, It's "slouch" not "sloch". Buy some glasses this weekend. hehehehe.
Do you think there's a message in this story for us?
Phil
Priska, How many thumbs have you got?
Phil
wow its a great story with slouch its a great story i wish i could read the story again cuse he have many homeworks there hahahaha
nick
any way its still a good story
nick
This is a wierd story.Everything rhymes,I think the slouch is very rude and the author is telling us that do your homework before it is time for some fun.This is a very important story because it teaches us not to be lazy to do only your homework.We should not be lazy or,something really bad and really horrible will happened to us.That's why we should do our homework happily.I like this story Mr.Phil,it teaches me about doing our homework happily.He...He...He...Ka Kite Ano Mr.Phil!!!
Sherline 3D
Oh Yeahh Mr.Phil I forgot something I think we should all do the homework so,there will be no slouches at all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sherline 3d
Mr.Phil, I'm waiting for all your comments don't be so long,I'll be waiting for you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sherline 3D
MR.PHIL !!!! I'M WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS AFTER ALL. WHERE ARE YOU?
SHERLINE 3D
Mr.Phil you know I thing the story was great and If it happen to us it may be so surprising I like the Grock, because it looks more nicer and cooler than a slouch, anyway If I know about that I must do my homework with the speed of light better than a slouch get out of a couch.[did I miss something that I need to say] and NO ONE CAN CHEAT MY COMMENT but Mr.Phil you must read it now before 7 minutes pass, or my father will use it
The story do rhyme, and it looks like weird too.
I have something to say: can...you... please... put...more...stories...on...the blog?!?!?!?
I know you know who is my name
I'll give you a hint I'm in 3A and i'm a boy, I SIT near the white board
White board.....................
Nadia Raph Me Sydney
.. .. .. ..
Who I am... It is B_I_N
R A
BYE,KAKITE ANO,ZAI JIAN,NO THING ELSE TO SAY
BRIAN 3A
hard to guess geeesshh!!
SORRY MR.PHIL I USE MY USER BUT I DONT KNOW WHY IS IT THE NAME LIKE THAT
ANy Way I WiLl CHecK Sd FoURs BloG
bye and then I will try look at your comment
Brian
Madeline , You've done well here. Who said it was tricky?
Have a good four days holiday.
Phil
yes Nick, It is a good story.
Phil
Sherline, Yes it does have a good lesson for us and the story works because it is unusual as well as rhymes.
Phil
Sorry Sherline, I've been busy for the past hour or so.
Phil
Yeah, tricky little message Brian. I'm sorry it's after 7 now, but perhaps you see it tomorrow.
Phil
Of course not I am still here I just open my gmail checking my aunts email at the right time I remember so I wish you can send me messages
Any way it is night I am not yet sleeping so if you want to write a comment it is ok I will answer it!!
Brian 3a
let's have a talk awhile..
Brian 3A
Are you sleeping if yes I will sleep But if not I will wait
AND NOW I AM WAITING FOR A FEW MINUTES FOR YOUR COMMENT..
Brian 3A
WELL then.. have a nice holiday
see you on monday!!!!!!!!I will check the blog soon, so write a lot of comment !!! I am not closinng the computer I will watch TV for a while.
Brian 3A
You're not answering than bye goodnight!!!!It is 9:4O bye
see you monday!!
Brian 3a
BYE!
It's a weird story. How could slouch get in the couch, I mean it's to small! but it's fun to catch some body with the grooks thingy, It's like a secret agent!!!!!
Hubert
It is a weird story. BY THE WAY, IS THERE REALLY A SLOUCH IN HERE?
tHE AUTHOR IS TRYING TO SAY NOT TO BE LAZY.
Corin
PS: sORRY I AM LATE.
Wow.... What a weird story.....
First there is bag that is written RARE... then a slouch from a couch come out... I think the author said to us " Hey kids don't forgot to do your homework first than do other things if your parents say so.."
Angela Stacia
3D
I think the story is trying to make kids do their homework if they don't there will be a slouch and they don't want that to happen.
Maybe the author thinks kids will be scared then they will have to do their homework or else a slouch will come out of your slouch
Marcel 3A
By the way who change the password???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Marcel 3A
Wow! I can open the blog but, I still think something should be done about the changing password problem.... Even though we found out who changed the password and we found out how to change it back.. we need to teach someone a lesson!
Judith 3D
This story is very wierd.I rather stay lying in the sun rather opening the bag!!!!!!!!!!!!
Shania Ie 3D
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