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Jungle playground
Our class needs a jungle playground.
We need a jungle playground because we can get a longer time to play.
A jungle playground would help us to relax and we can have fun. So a jungle playground would be nice to let kids play all the time and have fun.
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Computers
Class needs six computers . If we have six computers ,we can learn more about computer without going to the computer laboratory.we can play the computer during breaktimes .we can check for a dictionary so we don't need to ask the teacher.Each class will get six computers . we should have six computers so every thing would be easier and fun.
nicky
No detention forever
Our class needs no detention forever
If we got the very worse detention, we can have an action detention that we like. Like push up 30 times and run on the playground 10 times. Especialy the tk and the preschool students, they will cry if they get detention. If they are still naughty, just give them a book of don't be naughty, like nanny 911. We should have no detention forever so we can be happy in school all the time!
DENNIS3D
Our class needs to bring electronic things to school
Our class needs to bring electrons things to school 2 days every week egg. bring ANDS (DOS) (Nintendo Duel Screen ) on Minda & HP (Hand Phone) on Friday . if we can bring electronic things to school only to play at recess time we won't be bored foo playing other games
A Jungle Playground
Our class needs a jungle playground. If we had one,it can be more interesting and fun to play. It can be a real jungle with animals. The animals are fake, with a motor inside. We can learn more about the animal's that live in the jungle. The jungle would be n the playground.The students could use it everyday.They can play it from year 1 till year 4. We should have a jungle playground, so we can see what the animals look like. Corin 3A
A Class President
Our class needs a Class President.
A Class President could help the teacher control the students. He/She could be the one who controls the class. He/She can also add a new thing like making new accessories to the class. A Class President could be the role model of our class. A Class President can always show the class how to behave. He/She should have the most skills than the others. He/She has to be smart and understanding. Then, the teacher's could teach and the Class President could make sure they do the work. The teachers would not get sick and a Class President would be a second hand.
We should have a Class President so our class would be organized and the best class in STM. Judith 3D
Pet Day
Our class needs a pet day so we would not ask the teacher if we can bring our pet to school. The students would be very happy and they would like to see the other student's pet. I would bring a cute little puppy, and decorate it with a cute dress. I would name it Butonse because it is a very cute name according to me. That's why our class needs a pet day!!!
Sherline3D
My locker
Our class needs a locker with a key. If our class has a locker with a key, we can keep our personal things safely. If our class have a locker with a key, nobody can go into our locker. Having a locker with a key would be fun.
Claudia Amanda
SD 3D
Our class needs games!!!!!!!!!
Our class needs to bring games all the time.If we bring games we can have fun all the times.We can relax we will play it all the time when its break time & lunchtime, even lesson time!!!!!!!Bringing games to school would be fun!!
Hubert 3d
Play Stations
Our class needs 4 play stations in the class. If we have a play station we can play games. Many people can play together at one time. No body will get hurt during the game. The play station would be kept in the class. Four people can play at one time. Everybody can play the play station. Tha play station would make many people happy.
PETER 3A
Swimming Pool
our school needs a swimming pool because if we have one then we can swim on a hot day.If we have a swimming pool,we don't need to go to the sportsclub and pay more money
Nathan 3A
VVIP Room
Our class needs a Very Very Important Person.We can sleep in there when we are tired.In this room we also can watch the english channel and discovery channel but for the student who got punishment cannot watch tv.We can learn english,learn science and more from the english channel.We can also read books. We can read novels,science books,story books and other book that is fun.We should have Very Very Important person room so we can relax.
Swimming lessons
Our class needs to have a swimming lessons four days a week. By doing swimming lessons we can learn many swimming styles. And we can play water when it is hot day. We can then do another lesson with concentration. Swimming would be fun to learn
-Glenn 3 A-
Class President
Our class needs a class president.If we have a class president our class would be managed well,having a great leader,and especially giving great ideas.Whitout a class our class would be a disaster for example if student 1 is disturbing student 2 and student 2tells him to stop but student 1 doesn't want to stop and even the teachers can't stop him but what if the class president can?We should change our class president every unit because it wouldn't be fair if 1 person could be the class president for the year.
Having a class president would make our class better.
Laptop
Our class needs a Laptop for every body if we had one we do not need to write again. We can bring it home by that we can show responsibility. We can store any information in it.
A laptop
Our class needs laptop for every students (with internet and games).We need a laptop for every students,when or teacher we can give him/her an-email from our laptop.We don't need to go to the computer lab lesson We just have to use our laptop in our class.When it's rainning we just play our own games on our laptop.We should have a laptop as it would be great if we study on it
Game Boy Advance
Our class needs to bring a game boy to school when it is break and lunch time. It is fun and can played by two player. We can play it when it is raining. We sould have a game boy at school instead of lessons!!
Student Reflection
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