I think the story was wonderful... It is a mysterious story as well.... I like the Blue Jay... It seemed that the Blue Jay actually meant something.... I think if they captured the Blue Jay, the world will turn into only 1 color... And, if they didn't capture the Blue Jay, they would have they're colorful world again... Still, it was a great story.....
The things that makes speacial is all the place and the people become violet, then yellow, and it change to orange, then pink, and the last, it change to blue.
It was strange that the world became violet then yellow then orange then pink then blue then normal.Why did that happen?The story was very nice and colourfull even there is pink my favourite color.
The story Fantastic...I think the story makes a special thing is...... all the place and people change to colorful ... the colour change from violet,yellow.orange,pink and the last is blue.... It's a Wonderful story and i think this story is really magic... Clarissa 3D
I think the story was great. It is a mysterious story. I like the story Mr Phil, but howcome the world turned to violet after that yellow after that orange after that pink after that the blue jay was free and the world became there normal colour.
Nice,the story convinced me to read it and the blue jay if I'm not mistaken the blue jay is very rare...... The story meant that don't be jealous if there is one living being that has the only different color and they don't capture the only different colored living being in the world,until then they turned blue too it was kinda weird but still exiting.
I think the story was fantastic.It is quite a mysterious story because the world turned into violet,yellow,orange,pink,and blue.It seems that the Blue Jay really meant something and really is wonderful.If the people captured Blue Jay,the world would not be colourful and it's a fantastic story Mr.Phil! Sherline 3D
I think the story is wierd,because the other people turned into many colour but the blue jay still have his colour.What a mysterious story.The first colour was violet,and the 2nd colour was yellow.The next day the colour mixed up.How could that happen all the peoples are colourful ( not like our skin) they changed colour the same as the sky,but I still like the story.
The story is so funny, how can the world always change color. It was cool when the world got the color rainbow, so our color will be red, green, white, blue, yellow, and etc. OH ya, mr. Phil why does blue jay stays in it's own color
I think the story is very long, and a very strange, story.It's strange, when the world change into violet, then yellow, then orange, then pink, and the last , it change into blue. But it's also strange, when it turns to yellow, orange, pink, and blue, why the blue Jay did not turn to violet, yellow, orange, pink and blue color...........................
Clarissa, check your first sentnce. Why do you say "the story' twice? What should you say? Why are the colours important in the story. Why is the bird the central character? Phil
Claudia, That's the whole idea! Why doesn't the Blue Jay change colour when everything else does? You are the student. I am only the teacher. it's your job to tell me and do you now what? Your ideas, if they come out, can never really be wrong. Giving us your thoughts are the very reason you come to school. Phil
The story is weird but its cool because the world became violet,yellow,orange,pink,and blue. I like blue jay because from the colour of the world is violet to blue the colour is still blue and i like the story.I think its a magic.
Glenn, I agree with you. This is a fantastic story. There is something special about it - about the bird. Do you think it might be a special meaning for us? Phil
The story is weird but its nice because the world became violet,yellow,orange,pink,and blue. I like violet . violet the colour is still violet and i like the story.I think its a great story.
The story was cool Mr Phil but the it was a little strange when the people were violet but it was a good thing when blue jay escaped and the was normal again.
The story is nice it looks like it doesn't seem to be understanded easily anyway that is so good I think it looks like the world has a new natural disaster called colour virus ha..ha..ha.. BY BRIAN 3A........GOODBYE
Mr. Phil, according to me this story is special because the world can change into only 1 colour when the people caught the Blue Jay. But when they release it to be free the world turn normal and colorful again. Probably it means people should not feel curious and jealous when they find out there is something different or nicer than themselves. They have to accept the differences instead of caught it and put it into a cage. This is my actual opinion. Ha..ha.. Before its only for fun. Ha..ha..
It is all about difference. Blue Jay is the only thing whose color is different. Because of that, blue Jay is special. The story is great. Anyway, it is cool to have blue color because it is my favorite color.
I think the story is great, also a litle weid. I like blue jay. Why did the world change coulor from violet, yellow, orange, pink, then to blue. lts still a great story. Corin 3A
Marcel, it's OK to say it's a bit weird, but we need to go further and say why if possible. For example,is there a message in this story? If so, what might that message be? Stuff like that. That's what we need to practice thinking about. Phil
Madeline, you have now reached a point where you need to understand that you are the one who gives the answers to the question - why doesn't the Blue Jay change colour?
Tell us what you think because that's what's important. Your ideas are special and that's one of the main reasons for coming to school every day. So, what's your answer to your own question? Phil
3A students, I suggest you try explaining the story rather than repeating it because this is what we need to get good at doing. We want your ideas - they're the whole reason we come to school. Phil
the story is cooolll but I don't understand the story before it's blue and turned into a nother colour.... but I like blue Jay because he doesn't change his colour amazing...
I think the story was great ,but I also think the story is a little weird. Why did the world change coulor from violet, yellow, orange, pink, then to blue? It was a great story.
ya now I can open the blog a comment this post I love it you are a good story finder mr.phil cause I love the story its great the author has a very briliant brain he is a genius I love it what a great one I think the author think about some thing special cause how come he/she cou;ld think a great thing like it he is a very very special person ya its a interesting story very good one I love it nick
Nick, Yes, the writer is clever. I do think think though, that it is about time that you thought a little more about trying to give reasons for your comments. Also, it would seem that it is time for you to write in sentences using capital letters and full stops. Remember the other kids are reading your comments too. Phil
73 comments:
I think the story was wonderful... It is a mysterious story as well.... I like the Blue Jay... It seemed that the Blue Jay actually meant something....
I think if they captured the Blue Jay, the world will turn into only 1 color... And, if they didn't capture the Blue Jay, they would have they're colorful world again... Still, it was a great story.....
Judith 3D
The things that makes speacial is all the place and the people become violet, then yellow, and it change to orange, then pink, and the last, it change to blue.
Shannon 3D
It was strange that the world became violet then yellow then orange then pink then blue then normal.Why did that happen?The story was very nice and colourfull even there is pink my favourite color.
Priska
3D
The story Fantastic...I think the story makes a special thing is...... all the place and people change to colorful ... the colour change from violet,yellow.orange,pink and the last is blue....
It's a Wonderful story and i think this story is really magic...
Clarissa 3D
I think the story was great. It is a mysterious story. I like the story Mr Phil, but howcome the world turned to violet after that yellow after that orange after that pink after that the blue jay was free and the world became there normal colour.
Winson 3D
Mr Phil its a colorful story because the world only have 1 colour every year.... Everything is turning to the colourit was except Blue Ray???????
!!WEIRD!!!
But I actually like that story...
And... How the author think that thing??
By Angela Stacia
3D
Mr.Phil the story was amaizing
the world turned violet,orange,yellow and blue. But why is the blue jay is still blue ?
KENNETH
3D
Nice,the story convinced me to read it and the blue jay if I'm not mistaken the blue jay is very rare......
The story meant that don't be jealous if there is one living being that has the only different color and they don't capture the only different colored living being in the world,until then they turned blue too it was kinda weird but still exiting.
Joji 3D
This story is very funny because all the world become violet,orange,blue,pink,green,
yellow and blue.
Martin
i like the stotyt very much because the story is good and it remind me with something important
Jason 3d
I think the story was fantastic.It is quite a mysterious story because the world turned into violet,yellow,orange,pink,and blue.It seems that the Blue Jay really meant something and really is wonderful.If the people captured Blue Jay,the world would not be colourful and it's a fantastic story Mr.Phil!
Sherline 3D
I think the story is wierd,because the other people turned into many colour but the blue jay still have his colour.What a mysterious story.The first colour was violet,and the 2nd colour was yellow.The next day the colour mixed up.How could that happen all the peoples are colourful ( not like our skin) they changed colour the same as the sky,but I still like the story.
Shania 3D
The story is so funny, how
can the world always change color. It was cool when the world got the color rainbow, so our color will be red, green, white, blue, yellow, and etc. OH ya, mr. Phil why does blue jay stays in it's own color
If the world is like this story, it is wierd.
DENNIS 3D
I think the story is very long, and a very strange, story.It's strange, when the world change into violet, then yellow, then orange, then pink, and the last , it change into blue. But it's also strange, when it turns to yellow, orange, pink, and blue, why the blue Jay did not turn to violet, yellow, orange, pink and blue color...........................
Claudia 3D
I thing it's little bit weird how come the earth can turn into blue,yellow and green but my favorite character is blue jay bird
William 3D
Judith, Brilliant! You've really got the idea. Check your first statement - "i think the story WAS wonderful..." IS or WAS?
Phil
Mr.phil, how do the blue jay stay blue and the story is mysterious
Darrell 3D
Oh I know Mr.phil,the story tells us:we have to be ourselves or with your own colors. It is okay to be different.
KENNETH
3D
Shannon , what do you think the changing colours really mean?
Phil
Priska, I want to ask you the same question that i asked Shannon. What do the colours really mean?
Phil
Clarissa, check your first sentnce. Why do you say "the story' twice? What should you say?
Why are the colours important in the story. Why is the bird the central character?
Phil
Winson, I thought that you would tell me why the world changes colour. After all, you are the student.
Phil
Yes, Angela how come the author thought of such an idea? What does that tell us about the author?
Phil
Kenneth, why do you think the Blue Jay doesn't change colour?
Phil
Joji, you have made some excellent observations here. You show maturity and I really like the idea of the reader being drawn into the story.
Phil
Martin, I would have to agree that it is funny as in "weird". But why?
Phil
Jason, it reminds me of something interesting you say. I wonder what you mean by that. I'm curious. can you explain further?
Phil
As usual, Sherline, you have "cottoned on" to the basic meaning of the story. We need to share your ideas with the class.
Phil
Dennis, Good question . Why does the Blue Jay stay the same colour?
Phil
Shania, What does the story really mean? Give us the best of your ideas.
Phil
Claudia, That's the whole idea! Why doesn't the Blue Jay change colour when everything else does?
You are the student. I am only the teacher. it's your job to tell me and do you now what? Your ideas, if they come out, can never really be wrong. Giving us your thoughts are the very reason you come to school.
Phil
Darrell, that's exactly what I want to know. I much prefer to hear your ideas. So why does the Blue Jay NOT change colour?
Phil
wow what a coclourful story mrr phill where did you get these stories? its so amazing super amazing
The story is weird but its cool because the world became violet,yellow,orange,pink,and blue.
I like blue jay because from the colour of the world is violet to blue the colour is still blue and i like the story.I think its a magic.
-Glenn 3A-
Glenn, I agree with you. This is a fantastic story. There is something special about it - about the bird. Do you think it might be a special meaning for us?
Phil
EEEERRRrrrrrrrr we have a "salah kampung" here - somebody with no name. Who could that possibly be? My guess is Natalie!!!!
Phil
The story is weird but its nice because the world became violet,yellow,orange,pink,and blue.
I like violet . violet the colour is still violet and i like the story.I think its a great story.
Tata 3A
The story was cool Mr Phil but the it was a little strange when the people were violet but it was a good thing when blue jay escaped and the was normal again.
By.Raphael 3A
The story is nice it looks like it doesn't seem to be understanded easily anyway that is so good I think it looks like the world has a new natural disaster called colour virus ha..ha..ha..
BY BRIAN 3A........GOODBYE
why doesn't anyone wake up ?
Mr. Phil, according to me this story is special because the world can change into only 1 colour when the people caught the Blue Jay. But when they release it to be free the world turn normal and colorful again. Probably it means people should not feel curious and jealous when they find out there is something different or nicer than themselves. They have to accept the differences instead of caught it and put it into a cage. This is my actual opinion. Ha..ha.. Before its only for fun. Ha..ha..
Brian 3A
ONCE AGAIN, MR.PHIL THE BLUE JAY'S FEATHER COLOUR DOESN'T CHANGE CAUSE HIS NAME WAS "BLUE"...JAY SO HE WILL ALWAYS CONNECTED TO HIS NAME "BLUE"
BRIAN 3A
It is all about difference. Blue Jay is the only thing whose color is different. Because of that, blue Jay is special. The story is great. Anyway, it is cool to have blue color because it is my favorite color.
By Patric 3A
Patric, the Blue Jay is special, I agree, but what happens when it's put in the cage?
Phil
Tata, It's great that you like the story. Is there a lesson, do you think?
Phil
Rafael, What is the real moral in this story, do you think?
Phil
Brian a colour virus???? Hahahah, What's special about the story? Is it trying to tell us something?
Phil
Brian, not too bad - a very good opinion. Are you sure that you haven't got a"joki" there?
Phil
I think this story is a bit weird
Marcel 3A
I think the story is great, also a litle weid. I like blue jay. Why did the world change coulor from violet, yellow, orange, pink, then to blue. lts still a great story.
Corin 3A
Marcel, it's OK to say it's a bit weird, but we need to go further and say why if possible. For example,is there a message in this story? If so, what might that message be?
Stuff like that. That's what we need to practice thinking about.
Phil
Yeah Patric, the Blue Jay is special, but the trick is, can you explain why you think so?
Phil
Madeline, you have now reached a point where you need to understand that you are the one who gives the answers to the question - why doesn't the Blue Jay change colour?
Tell us what you think because that's what's important. Your ideas are special and that's one of the main reasons for coming to school every day. So, what's your answer to your own question?
Phil
Corin, I agree with you that it's a great story.
Why do you think that?
Is there a message in the story?
I suggest you read my comments to Madeline because you are in the same position as her with this type of work.
Phil
3A students, I suggest you try explaining the story rather than repeating it because this is what we need to get good at doing.
We want your ideas - they're the whole reason we come to school.
Phil
i don't think the story is wonderful but, it is quite nice. the writer sometimes write and and and and he also write then then then + it is strange
Jason 3A'
I think the story is good Mr.Phil. I like the Blue Jay. It was a wonderful story Mr. Phil.
Sydney Tanoe
3A
I think the world can change its colour by itself but the blue jay was staying blue.
Nathan 3A
Somebody can become special when he was different with another people, so try to become different but in good things....................
Peter 3A
wow the story is very nice and magical
Vabio 3A
Jason, Do you think the Blue Jay is special?
Phil
Sydney, yes it is a wonderful story. What is it that makes you say it is wonderful?
Phil
Nathan, why does the Blue Jay remain the same colour?
Phil
Peter, I think you are right with the "word" different. Why is the bird different?
Phil
vabio, What is in the story that makes you say that it is magical?
Phil
still no comments from Arif, Anthonny, Nadia, Natalie, Angela.
What a pity!
Phil
the story is cooolll but I don't understand the story before it's blue and turned into a nother colour....
but I like blue Jay because he doesn't change his colour amazing...
ARIF 3A
i like the story i just dunno why !!!
Gaby 3A
I think the story was great ,but I also think the story is a little weird. Why did the world change coulor from violet, yellow, orange, pink, then to blue? It was a great story.
ya now I can open the blog a comment this post
I love it you are a good story finder mr.phil cause I love the story its great the author has a very briliant brain he is a genius I love it what a great one I think the author think about some thing special cause how come he/she cou;ld think a great thing like it he is a very very special person ya its a interesting story very good one I love it
nick
it is good story but one letter after pok that must be capital.
and the story was strange how can the world can change intoviolet.
i'm conveiws
Anthony 3A
Yes Anthonny, it is a bit strange that the world changes colour. Do you think the writer is clever?
Why doesn't the Blue Jay change colour?
Phil
Nick,
Yes, the writer is clever. I do think think though, that it is about time that you thought a little more about trying to give reasons for your comments.
Also, it would seem that it is time for you to write in sentences using capital letters and full stops. Remember the other kids are reading your comments too.
Phil
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