To do this you'll need someone to time you for one minute. The idea is to write as much as you can in one minute and only one minute, just to see how fast you can organize your thoughts and get them down in writing.
Write directly on "COMMENTS" below.
Select ONE of the following six topics:-
pets, aliens and monsters, soccer, dreams, pizza, games.
Remember ONE minute only with no extra time!
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79 comments:
Pets are really fun to play with when you are alone. There are kinds of pets for example hamster, dog, cat,fish, and mice.Unfortunally I don't have a pet even if I want to.
Priska
3D
PETS
I have a pet name Dino... He is a golden retriever and now he lives in Bali. I cannot keep him here because our house is not big enough, and in Bali I have a bigger house......
Judith 3D
pizza is very yummy to eat they are so wonder full to eat that they make me looks like a people that never eat cause its yummy.
nicky
Dreams...
My dram is be a comic maker because I love to draw very much...and I must to improve my drawings become a very very nice drawing...
Angela 3D
Games
I like playing games because they are fun and exciting.
Winson 3D
Dreams
Dreams are like stars,you can touch them ,but if you follow them they will lead you to your destany.I dream of being a doctor because I can cure sick people and get a lot of money...
Sherline 3D
Games
Games are really fun to play. If you are bored just play with like, NDS
lite, Gameboy, PSP, and many things.
Claudia Amanda
SD 3D
My dream is bad Mr.Phil because everytime I sleep there always a nightmare in my dream Mr.Phil but sometimes I have nice dream Mr.Phil how about you Mr.Phil
William 3D
Dreams
All my dreams are cute and horror.
my dreams are not real and I like it so much...................
SHANNON 3D
ALIENS
aliens are imaginary cretures that always say gretings people of earth
"we come in peace".
Kenneth
3D
Kenneth, Are you sure that this took a minute?
Phil
Judith, Did it take a full minute to write this?
I think you should have added what the Dino likes to do and what you like about Dino.
Phil
Priska, I'm a bit surprised that you didn't say why you want a pet and perhaps why you can't have one.
How long did it take to write this?
Phil
Winson, Did it really take one minute to write only ten words?
Mmmmmmm. It looks like we need some practice, what do you think?
Phil
Nicky, I just knew that you would write about pizza!
I wonder why you didn't talk about the different toppings and how often you get to eat pizza.
Phil
Angela, It's a great dream to have. How long have you had this dream?
Don't you think you could have told us this?
Phil
Sherline. This is good. did you write for the full minute?
Phil
William. Don't you think William, that the word William comes up a little too often. Actually,William is not a word, but William as a name and William is the name of many kings and prince even today.
But you wrote about your dreams, scary ones, and probably a lot of them. You asked me questions too. I like that - interacting with your reader.
Yes, I have dreams and I always have and I guess I always will. I can remember dreams from the time I was only about four years old!
Phil
Shannon, I can see that this is what we need to work on. You have lots of ideas, but they come out very slowly. So we need to practice. What do you think?
Phil
Claudia, You have some ideas. What do you think the tricky part is with this exercise?
Is one minute too short?
Is it too difficult to type quickly enough?
Is it too difficult to think of things to say?
Phil
Mr. Phil,I didn't have time to write about Dino..... It's already a full minute!
Judith 3D
OK Judith, I can see now that you guys are not used to typing fast, or perhaps thinking fast, is that true?
But anyway, it's good because we can see that students can easily improve on this.
Phil
Soccer is a fun sport you can exercise while having fun its very tiring though but you move all of you body.If you are the keeper you will move your body,hands,and feet but if you are the striker,defender, and midfielder you will move you body an feet only but its still fun and soccer is painful sometimes and even deadly to humans but i still love soccer though.Oh yeah and soccer is one of the worlds famous sports.
Joji 3D
Pets
I like pets and I have a pet when I was little.There was bird,hamster,crab,gold fish and turtles.All of my pet died because I can't take care them well.
Games are fun, and it can cear you up. there are many kinds of games
DENNIS 3D
My name is up there Mr.Phil,I forgot to put on my name.
Shania Ie 3D
Mr. Phil,
For me one minute is to short because you know I type slow.....did you know that?
If I want to type more words, it will be long.
And also this ....I think slow because it is one minute!!!
It is to fast!!!!!
DENNIS 3D
I have a puppy name maxy. He is 3 weeks old and his breed is rottweiler.
Natania 3D
Pizza are yummy to eat,so many people love to eat pizza.
Darrell 3D
Joji, this is pretty good, and you'll notice you managed to say more than most of the other kids. Perhaps this tells us that you get more opportunity to speak English at home. Is that correct?
Phil
Dennis, it looks like you need to spend a little more time thinking before you start, because I'm sure that there is a lot more that you can say about games and what they are good for.
Perhaps we just need more practice.
Phil
Darrell, I think this type of exercise is what you need to do more often. I know that you have more ideas than this about pizza, but they didn't come out this time. But it will be much easier second time round.
Phil
Pizzs is very yummy. There are cheese,tomato,mushroom,chicken and many in the pizza.If we eat pizza with chilli sauce,it will be more yummy!
Martin 3D
Martin, is this a whole minute?
What did you find tricky? Was the time too short? Was it difficult to come up with ideas?
Could you have written more?
Phil
Nothing from Hubert, natania, Jason, or clarissa.
P.
Pets are cute. We can keep it in our house. The example of a mammal is like dogs, cats,chicken, rabbit, ant and much more.
Clarissa 3D
I have a pet his name is Maxie he is a puppy. He is 3 weeks old.
Natania 3D
Mr. P I am slow at typing I missed some word and I dont get to tell my puppys breed.
Natania 3D
i know many all breeds of dogs but i wont be able 2 right all in a minute cuz it'll be 2 much .......
ok here r the ones that i can type .....
basset hound
grand basset griffon vendeen
basset fauve de bretagne
petit baset griffon vendeen
beagle
bloodhound
borzoi
dashshunds
finnish spits
yorkshire terrier
foxhoung
grand bleu de gascoigne
greyhound
maltese
pomeranian
saluki
irish wolfhound
otter hound
golden retriver
affenpinscer
australian silky terrier
bolognese
bishon frise
king charles spaniel
well thats all i can write mr. phil
gaby 3A
this s actually not the hw but this is true mr. phil , Martin is CRAZY about PIZZA , i have mandarin lessons with him and mostly all that he talks about is PIZZA my class mates in that lesson even says Martin can even become KING of PIZZA .......... Ha Ha .......weird and funny but true .........
Gaby 3A
pets are very cute because ,some are very cute ,and fluffy an so i want one pet .I want a dog i want to take care of it plus its cute.
angela 3A
aliens and monsters is very scary because they are seen.
Nathan
3a
I very like Ben10 because Ben10 can change into 10 type of alien example:
Swampfire
Jet Ray
Echo - echo
Humangesor
Big Chill
Goob
Choronostone
Spider Monkey
etc.
Peter 3A
Pets are cute and funy such as dog. I can train them. Dog is a loyal kind of animal such as Labrador.
by Patric
Pets are cute and funy such as dog. I can train them. Dog is a loyal kind of animal such as Labrador.
by Patric
Natania, i can seee now that you are a really slow typer, but ar least you had a shot!
Phil
Gaby, did you write all that in ONE minute?
Phil
hahaha Gaby, that's funny. But he doesn't look like a Pizza king , does he?
Phil
Ngela, I can see that you were trying to type as fast as possible, hejejeje.
Phil
Corin, you've written this very well!
phil
Nathan, Did this take you a full minute?
Phil
Patric, This is pretty good. I like labradors too.
Phil
I guess Peter, that these are games that you are desribing here, is that true?
Phil
Clarisa, I like the way that you have given examples here. Good!
Phil
Oops, that should be "CLARISSA", double "s."
Phil
Pizza
i like pizza because it's yummy.sometimes in canteen we eat pizza.pizza is more yummy if you put parmesan cheese.
Marcel 3A
Pets
I have 14 pet rabbits.I share it with my sister.Actually las time, i have many pets like birds,hamsters,dog,etc
Megan
pets is very cute like puppies.
Pets are really fun.
there nice like puppies,rabbit hamster.
I like very much cute and funny
Sorry I forget my name '
Tata 3A
Games
Games are fun. Usually people play electronic games. There were many types of games such as adventure, problem, classic, sport and many other types of games. Games are expensive that's why I'm not allowed to buy games if I saw them>
BY BRIAN 3A
Games
I like games.Because games are fun.Usually elcronic games.I like to play with my friends and my brother.I like to play Mario Kart because we can play with our friends.
Glenn 3A
pets are very cute,fun and playful.Even if I do have a pet, It have died.
Natalie3A
MONSTER AND ALIENS
Monster and aliens are totally cool because they get to suck peoples brain, suck their flash.
By.Raphael 3A
Ok mr phil Ican play soccer and yester day MUwin the game and 5-2 I like to play soccer an I like to wath MU play.
Vabio
Pets
Pets are cute,Pets are funny.They can cheer us up when we are sad because they are funny. Last time my sister have 23 fish,10 little turtle and 2 rabbit. I have 2 pet turtle and 10 fish but my mom give it to someone so I don't have any pet again.
Madeline 3A
Tata, don't you think you're too young to start forgetting your name?
Phil
Megan, Fouteen pet rabbits!!!!!
That's a lot! but how come you say "its'? Don't you mean "they?"
Good one vabio, I know that typing is not easy. It isn't easy for me either!
Phil
Brian, this is good and quite well organized. Check the word "saw'. Do you mean "saw' or "see?"
Phil
Marcel, I think you're right about the parmesan cheese.
Phil
Madeline, you have plenty of ideas, but you need to remember that plural nouns usually end in "s". Isn't that right?
Phil
Glenn, you seem to have done quite well here. Are you sure it was only ONE minute?
Phil
Rafael, so gruesome! so horrid, so disgusting!! EEeeeeEEe!!!!
Phil
Rafael, so gruesome! so horrid, so disgusting!! EEeeeeEEe!!!!
Phil
natalie, you've done very well here.
Phil
Pets are very cute especially dog they can save our house from bugler they can also remind us to be careful of stranger, Fish are very cute they make us fresh when we see them because they swim here and there they are very very cute.
Nadia Clara 3A
freeze tag is realy fun because
i can ca5tch people and that people
will freeze. the catcer must be only one.
ANTHONNY 3A
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