Wednesday, February 18, 2009

HOMEWORK 18 FEBRUARY 2009

Be careful. To write your PERSUASIVE WRITING PROJECT story here by just clicking on the Pencil. Then scroll to the bottom of the last entry, type in your story and publish, so that we keep all the stories together.
DO NOT DELETE ANY TEXT!


Jungle playground
Our class needs a jungle playground.
We need a jungle playground because we can get a longer time to play.
A jungle playground would help us to relax and we can have fun. So a jungle playground would be nice to let kids play all the time and have fun.


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Computers

Class needs six computers . If we have six computers ,we can learn more about computer without going to the computer laboratory.we can play the computer during breaktimes .we can check for a dictionary so we don't need to ask the teacher.Each class will get six computers . we should have six computers so every thing would be easier and fun.

nicky

No detention forever

Our class needs no detention forever

If we got the very worse detention, we can have an action detention that we like. Like push up 30 times and run on the playground 10 times. Especialy the tk and the preschool students, they will cry if they get detention. If they are still naughty, just give them a book of don't be naughty, like nanny 911. We should have no detention forever so we can be happy in school all the time!

DENNIS3D

Our class needs to bring electronic things to school

Our class needs to bring electrons things to school 2 days every week egg. bring ANDS (DOS) (Nintendo Duel Screen ) on Minda & HP (Hand Phone) on Friday . if we can bring electronic things to school only to play at recess time we won't be bored foo playing other games

A Jungle Playground

Our class needs a jungle playground. If we had one,it can be more interesting and fun to play. It can be a real jungle with animals. The animals are fake, with a motor inside. We can learn more about the animal's that live in the jungle. The jungle would be n the playground.The students could use it everyday.They can play it from year 1 till year 4. We should have a jungle playground, so we can see what the animals look like. Corin 3A

A Class President

Our class needs a Class President.

A Class President could help the teacher control the students. He/She could be the one who controls the class. He/She can also add a new thing like making new accessories to the class. A Class President could be the role model of our class. A Class President can always show the class how to behave. He/She should have the most skills than the others. He/She has to be smart and understanding. Then, the teacher's could teach and the Class President could make sure they do the work. The teachers would not get sick and a Class President would be a second hand.

We should have a Class President so our class would be organized and the best class in STM. Judith 3D

Pet Day

Our class needs a pet day so we would not ask the teacher if we can bring our pet to school. The students would be very happy and they would like to see the other student's pet. I would bring a cute little puppy, and decorate it with a cute dress. I would name it Butonse because it is a very cute name according to me. That's why our class needs a pet day!!!

Sherline3D


My locker

Our class needs a locker with a key. If our class has a locker with a key, we can keep our personal things safely. If our class have a locker with a key, nobody can go into our locker. Having a locker with a key would be fun.

Claudia Amanda

SD 3D


Our class needs games!!!!!!!!!

Our class needs to bring games all the time.If we bring games we can have fun all the times.We can relax we will play it all the time when its break time & lunchtime, even lesson time!!!!!!!Bringing games to school would be fun!!


Hubert 3d


Play Stations


Our class needs 4 play stations in the class. If we have a play station we can play games. Many people can play together at one time. No body will get hurt during the game. The play station would be kept in the class. Four people can play at one time. Everybody can play the play station. Tha play station would make many people happy.

PETER 3A

Swimming Pool

our school needs a swimming pool because if we have one then we can swim on a hot day.If we have a swimming pool,we don't need to go to the sportsclub and pay more money

Nathan 3A


VVIP Room

Our class needs a Very Very Important Person.We can sleep in there when we are tired.In this room we also can watch the english channel and discovery channel but for the student who got punishment cannot watch tv.We can learn english,learn science and more from the english channel.We can also read books. We can read novels,science books,story books and other book that is fun.We should have Very Very Important person room so we can relax.

Swimming lessons

Our class needs to have a swimming lessons four days a week. By doing swimming lessons we can learn many swimming styles. And we can play water when it is hot day. We can then do another lesson with concentration. Swimming would be fun to learn

-Glenn 3 A-


Class President

Our class needs a class president.If we have a class president our class would be managed well,having a great leader,and especially giving great ideas.Whitout a class our class would be a disaster for example if student 1 is disturbing student 2 and student 2tells him to stop but student 1 doesn't want to stop and even the teachers can't stop him but what if the class president can?We should change our class president every unit because it wouldn't be fair if 1 person could be the class president for the year.

Having a class president would make our class better.

Laptop

Our class needs a Laptop for every body if we had one we do not need to write again. We can bring it home by that we can show responsibility. We can store any information in it.

A laptop

Our class needs laptop for every students (with internet and games).We need a laptop for every students,when or teacher we can give him/her an-email from our laptop.We don't need to go to the computer lab lesson We just have to use our laptop in our class.When it's rainning we just play our own games on our laptop.We should have a laptop as it would be great if we study on it

Game Boy Advance

Our class needs to bring a game boy to school when it is break and lunch time. It is fun and can played by two player. We can play it when it is raining. We sould have a game boy at school instead of lessons!!




Student Reflection

I like doing the writing step because it was very-very fun and interesting!!


By:Anthonny.p

33 comments:

Big Jumboo said...

If you get stuck just write a comment and I'll see if I can help by answering you.
Don't panic.
Phil

Big Jumboo said...

where is the pencil ?
brian

Big Jumboo said...

Right next to the word "COMMENTS" Brian.
Actually, it doesn't look much like a pencil - too short, but that's it.
Phil

Big Jumboo said...

Hello Mr. Phil,

Where do you write after you click the pencil?

Judith 3D

Big Jumboo said...

Judith,
It will open as an editing page, so simply scroll down to the end of the last story. Hit "enter" so that you are ready to type. Simply publish when you've finished.
Phil

Big Jumboo said...

James get off the blog!!!!
P.

Big Jumboo said...

Who deleted Winson's Arcade story?
GGGGGgggggggrrrrrrrRRRRRR!!!!!!!
P.

Big Jumboo said...

Gaby ! Gaby1 Where's your story?
P.

!Secret! said...

Mr.Phil I can't find the pencil I am stuck!!!!!!!!!!!

!Secret! said...

above its me angela 3D

Big Jumboo said...

Angela, Read my answer to Brian. He had the same problem as you.
P.

!Secret! said...

But Mr.Phil I did'nt find it!!!!!!!!!

Big Jumboo said...

Angela,
Just look at the page title HOMEWORK and slowly scroll to the bottom of the page where you see the word "COMMENTS" and right next to it is this funny-looking pencil. That's it.
P.

Big Jumboo said...

Hi Mr. Phil,

I also cannot find the pencil. I cannot find any pencil next to 'comment'...nothing... maybe the pencil can only be seen in some computers.

what should I do ? can I write my homework here ?

By Patric 3A

!Secret! said...

Mr.Phil I can't see it!!!!!!!!!Word comments

Big Jumboo said...

Guys,
To write a comment you have to click on COMMENTS correct? Well just next to it is a funny-looking yellowish thing that is actually a pencil. It may not look like one, but it is.
That's it!!
P.

!Secret! said...

I can't see it Mr.Phil.......

Big Jumboo said...

Our class needs paint ball for one day every week. So we can play as a team and play war with guns and shoot things and shoot people. Its only for boys having paint ball would make a school.

Student reflection

I liked doing prewriting because we get to list our ideas.

By.Raphael

Big Jumboo said...

Animal Day
Our class needs an animal day . An animal day would be fun because there would be mamals,birds,reptiles,and insects. We can draw our favorite animals in the past present future or the ones we imagine.We shouldhave an animal day it,would be fun.

kenneth 3D

!Secret! said...

still can't!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Angela 3D

Big Jumboo said...

Mr. phil i still can't find he pencil

Glenn 3A

Big Jumboo said...

Rafael and Kenneth , you guys have to learn to write on the HOMEWORK page. You've written under COMMENTS here, so you're close. Perhaps you can't fine the pencil.
Phil

Big Jumboo said...

Glenn and Angela, you were right next to the PENCIL when you clicked on COMMENTS to write here - not even 1 cm away.
Perhaps it doesn't look too much like a pencil, but it is. Take another look.
Phil

Big Jumboo said...

A Special Locker
Our class needs a special locker for 3D!A special locker would be nice and colurful, because if the locker is so plain it will not good to see.The locker can keep many things.We can put our clothes or change our clothes in the special changing room.The special changing room is inside the special locker.We also have a special room.One is for our class and the other one is for the locker.Our room is combined with the ILC.We combined it because we can have more space for it and it can be separated and we don't get confused!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Shania Ie 3D

Big Jumboo said...

I still cannot find the pencil anywhere even if I refresh the computer and the text is not in me. It's at school so even later If I found the pencil I still can't write.Why do vabio get many spelling mistakes?

Marcel 3A

Big Jumboo said...

Marcel, look at the entry above your comment. You could have written it there on COMMENTS. At least it would appear even if not exactly on the correct page.
We'll organize a special lesson to get better at this.
Phil

Big Jumboo said...

Now I know why I cant't find the pecil.It's because I open littlejumboos.blogspot.com directy not from the blogger writing the user name and password.then when I write a comment I have to use the user name and password so when I look back I can see the pencil.That means strangers can't see the pencil right Mr.Phil?Today I open it with blogger I can see the pencil,But the problem is the paper is at school.Now so, I can't do the homework.

Big Jumboo said...

Who are you?
P.

Unknown said...

still can't
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Big Jumboo said...

What's a "pecil"?
Does anyone know?
P.

Unknown said...

I know it!!!!!!!!!
but I can't find the pencil...< can't see>

Big Jumboo said...

Angela, start with the main page HOMEWORK and scroll to the bottom until you fine the link for COMMENTS. The pencil is right next it on the right.
Phil

Big Jumboo said...

i FINALLY FOUND IT!!!!


NATALIE3A